The Amazing Maurice pg1

This is page 1 of an extremely abridged adaption of The Amazing Maurice and his Educated Rodents by Terry Pratchett that I drew (in one day and night *cough*) for a Narrative Illustration class I took in Fall of 05'. I know it may be a bit sloppy in places, and I messed up my perspective here and there, but it was my first comic. That's my excuse anyways ^_^;