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Fèisean: Áed agus Solus




In Summer warmth of solstice sun
when red mare Áine freely runs
and shadows play on forest floor
thence healing harvest has begun
Calendula and Maidenhair
by light of Wisp, cut and prepared
into a curing draft prized dear
beneath still trees and calming air

At season's end, the gift of seed
brings harvest feast, and kin to feed
the first fruits, sweet, and ripening
make goblets filled with berried mead
Then lovelings handfast for the year
though evening tempests carry fear
Lúnasa's bounty overflows
and storms diminish not the cheer

With second reaping's wine and wheat,
a maiden cuts the final sheaf,
and acorns from the ancient oaks
spill with the leaves at Autumn's feet
The dying god, his gift of blood,
pours to the land in crimson flood
that winter's night be not an end
and cost for life be understood

Though light gives way to Samhain's shroud,
and thinning veil shows spirits roused,
in every hearth burns common flame
that Otherworld be disavowed
With hoarfrost at horizon's wake,
and crystal breath on highland lakes
the stores of grain and drying meat
are kept preserved through winter's takes

As length of days slow their decline
the woven Ivy wreathed in Tinne
bring summer's warmth to cold of Yule
with readied casks of mulling wine
The Amaranth and Mistletoe
still evergreen despite the snow
foretell rebirth of land and leaf
though still within midwinter's throws

With wand of Birch clutched to her breast,
the Bride breathes life to consort's chest;
both now reborn, they consummate
to sow the land at her behest
And though the firns and sleet ensue,
sweet milk flows forth from enceinte ewe;
the month of wolves and death may run
but snow gives way to verdure hues

Eostra's dawn shines arulent rays
on Primrose fields of lesser fay
where maidens walk in gowns sheer white
through leveret filled harecrop leys
They gather dew in phials of glass
from albus blooms of Galanthus,
like melting snow from warming days
the healing proof that winter's passed

Now driven flocks to pastures graze,
and bonfires 'round maypoles raised
bring Aos sí from their faerie mounds
to dance at Beltane's golden blaze
from flaming stacks of Winter Rye
and Juniper, to purify
the fertile land of fragrant soil,
will gift Spring's promise to the sky
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Three months of only working on this on sleepless nights. I need more insomnia.

I would be most appreciative for any comments or critiques. This is my first poem of this size and style. I am particularly curious as to whether or not seasons and festivals are brought to mind clearly when reading.

The title loosely translated means Festival: Fire and Light.
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~752364 Sep 20, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I'm not pro enough to critique, so here is my noob comment (sorry) xD

Oh my goodness this piece is unlike anything I've read before...and it's so lovely <3 I loved the Celtic and herb lore references, in particular "amaranth"~ The strong allusions to nature also brought Wordsworth's works to my mind, though I like this much more because this reminds me of ancient historical saturnalias and festivals, definitely - wow :nod:
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Mood: Adoration *Vindblain Sep 21, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much for the kind words!
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~ShuyinTheEnigmatic Sep 20, 2011  Student Writer
A very awesome poem!
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Mood: Joy *Vindblain Sep 20, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for taking the time to both read it and say so!
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~ShuyinTheEnigmatic Sep 20, 2011  Student Writer
You're welcome!
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*xlntwtch Sep 18, 2011   Writer
I enjoyed this poem very much. I must first say, though it's in my blood (just a drop, mind you) I know scarcely anything about Celtic mythology. I wanted to both thank you for your obvious hard and wonderful work here (a :+fav:) and to say I attended a wedding recently at which the bride and groom did a "handfast" with ribbons--is that what's meant here? "...lovelings handfast..."? I'm pretty sure that's what it was called then. A journal entry by ~wh0rem0ans led me here and I'm glad it did. :)
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Mood: Joy *Vindblain Sep 19, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
That is exactly what is meant by handfasting! It was tradition that young lovers handfast for a full year, at the end of which they would decide to stay together or not. It was like marriage practice that eventually became an actual marriage ceremony.
And I'm glad you liked it! Thank you so much for commenting!
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*xlntwtch Sep 19, 2011   Writer
The handfasting was a beautiful part of a wonderful wedding. I was glad to see it mentioned here.
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~witchwomanleah Sep 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
This pounded into my soul. I had to read it in small segments so I could catch my breath and come back to earth. There is no word or phrase to describe this beautamazingness...
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